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I give up. You go and read it. The word "zoofilia" is not English, so you should use something else to replace it if you are writing in English. It's interesting but the grammar needs work - for example, this sentence has a semicolon where you might have meant to put a comma: It's hard to imagine how much easier it can possibly be. Honestly, what are you waiting for? Also, this sentence doesn't make sense because there was no introduction given about the topic of the blog post: I've never seen an animal that looked more cheery than he does in these photos. Obviously, you had better check for spelling and grammar mistakes like this before you publish your blog. I am sure this is not the worst mistake you can make, but it's definitely worth taking the time to proofread your posts. As far as I am concerned, zoophilia is a hatred of animals. It's hard to imagine how much easier it can possibly be[/b] - Anon I've never seen an animal that looked more cheery than he does in these photos. Clearly the dude just loves dogs. Also, I prefer dogs to cats so I can see why I am biased towards dogs. I am sure this is not the worst mistake you can make, but it's definitely worth taking the time to proofread your posts.You are probably right about that :)Are you suggesting more blog content or any specific direction? I think it's already pretty decent for a blog run by a guy who doesn't know too much about blogging... I've never seen an animal that looked more cheery than he does in these photos. I'm glad to hear it, although if I'm being honest, I was hoping to see some more interesting content that would actually draw people in.Actually, the title could be improved by removing the word "zoofilia" and replacing it with something else. Maybe "zoophilia"?Haha!There are no rules here, but I think you should try to be more engaging in your posts :). Try to make them sound a little bit more entertaining or funny or something like that because you are not really doing much for me yet. Well...the English sentence above is wrong... I've never seen an animal that looked more cheery than he does in these photos. Another example I can give is "I've never seen an animal that looks so happy as he does in these photos."On the other side, you might consider improving your sentence structure. For example, you could revise the previous sentence to something like this:I'm glad to hear it, although if I'm being honest, I was hoping to see some more interesting content that would actually draw people in.This is a good start but I would consider adding something else while at it. You should definitely create a catchy title for your content and try to keep the reader engaged with it. cfa1e77820
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